Unfinished Songs

My unfinished songs years ago

Here are some of the unfinished songs I remember composing years ago:

1. Do you remember? (at  13 years old)



My friend, do you remember
the times we had and spent together?
Wasn't it just like yesterday?


2. You and I (at 13 years old)



You and I aren't meant to be
Cause you don't love me but I'm blind to see
And that you only feeds my fantasy
And now...I am in my reality

Love gets weary and love gets blind
Love is unjust, rude, and unkind
Why is love so mean to me
But not how it used to be?

Why is it hard to admit the fact?
That "you and I" is just an act
(the rest is forgotten. haha)

3. A Moment Called Forever (at 13 years old)


And until my dying day
I won't regret to say
That I want us together
In a moment called forever...

4. Wake Me Up (at 16 years old)


(Chorus)
Wake me up, wake me up
From this painful bliss of slumber
Sing to me, sing to me
The song of my life
Before I die, hold me close
And whisper once more
The words of hope, and peace, and love...

(Bridge)
I thank the heavens You've come
to save me from the
hell I've built for myself
And before it's too late
You've shown me
just how it means to be loved
to be loved...

You wake me up, wake me up
From this painful bliss of slumber
You sing to me, sing to me
The song of my life
Before I die, You hold me close
And whisper once more
Your words of hope, and peace and love...

5. Like An Angel (at 16 or 17 years old)



You don't know me but I

know things about you

I don't know how and why

I'm captivated by  you

I love your messed up hair

I love when you don't care

I wonder if you knew

I love it, boy, when you

(Chorus)

Smile

Like an angel

and you

Glow

Like an angel

Boy, stay the same

I don't know your name

But well,

You're like an angel

Been watching you for so long

Asking myself if you're real

Think I'd write  you a song

To tell you how I feel

I love your dark brown eyes

I think I see you in the skies

I wonder if you knew

I love it, boy, when you

(Repeat Chorus)

Don't fly away (Like an angel)

Forever stay (Like an angel)

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Note: The song "No More"is posted on my profile and it's my first ever finished song. It was written when I was 17 years old.

(I didn't send Read Requests for this.)
I hope you enjoyed! :)

Reviews

[Eddie Davis]

You can certainly see a maturity as your writing progressed. Even at 13 you had the gift. Have you thought about going back and working on some of these unfinished ones? I think they have definite potential.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

I can still remember the melodies but I find it hard to finish them, don't know why. Thanks a lot, Eddie! :x

[nibhz]

wonderful! waiting for the complete versions!

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Thank you so much. I appreciate your reviews very much! :x

[WILDERNESS]

Full marks for the efforts ................. a unique poem indeed. Liked the autobiography of young love.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Glad you liked it. Thank you so much! :)

[MsJewel]

Blue, these are gorgeous. You should finish the ones unfinished. They really are lovely and I would love to hear them set to music.

:) Julie

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

The melodies just came to my mind in random way back then. I'll try to finish these songs, though that sure sounds like a hard work. Thanks, Julie. You are an encouragement. ;)

[WithLoveandLoss.]

"And until my dying day
I won't regret to say
That I want us together
In a moment called forever..."

An intriguing read, the style is impeccable. Thanks for sharing.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

I like that song, too. Thanks a lot! ;)

[EmaleighLynn]

These are lovely! I feel the emotion in them, the pain. Fantastic job! (even though it was years ago)

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Thank you, Ema! ;)

[SyberRose]

I really enjoyed reading your songs of yesterday...thank you for posting them Blue...lovely words...Rose:)

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

That's my favorite. It brings me tears whenever I sing it. Thanks a lot, Rose! :x