Infinity

Please critique, I would love the feedback!

Imagine a realm of pure infinity

It’s more than you can fathom

These paradoxes cannot be made

It’s just one strand of datum

You cannot comprehend

The fact there is forever

It is just impossible

There is no mind so clever

You cannot picture

An infinite amount of time

So live life in the moment

And sit back and watch me rhyme!

Author's Note

Please just be nice when critiquing, we all want to learn and help each other.

Reviews

[Riley Justine]

I like this piece! The minding boggling idea of infinity was brought through very well in this poem and with the playful ending, it was very well put together :)