One more...

One more shove

And I'll fall

And when I fall

I'll fall hard

I'm falling apart

Limb by limb

Internal organs

Decaying

And you have brought me to my knees

You can hear my pleas

Crying 'save me'

As of now 

I'm being burried alive

One after another

Packing on dirt with a shovel

Suffocating me

You are the only one who can really save me

So just think:

One more shove

I'll fall 

And when I fall

I'll fall hard....

Reviews

[Jonas]

Is that a super amazing rhyming system? I'm taking that.
Seriously, the best flow in a poem I've seen so far.

[ashleymarie]

Wow. Thanks I appreciate it! Makes me smile a little. Lol

[Jonas]

Good to know I'm contributing to society in some way.

[ashleymarie]

Hahah...yeah!

[Nessie_AJ]

Awesome work! This poem almost sounded like sound lyrics! The emotion was very raw and heart breaking.

[ashleymarie]

I appreciate the comments!