A Soul Cannot Be Scarred

To everyone who is holding onto emotional pain

I know, my cherished one, that you were gravely injured

That the scars you sustained are deeply ingrained

And that you dare not allow ...  to feel for a human

Your lesson was learned time and again

 

But the scars you attained are of earthly existence

Made of this world of mournful resistance

While the soul is ethereal ... made only of light

And shephards us through to find what is right

 

The soul does forgive what the body remembers

Take leave of your mind and all its dark chambers

Look to the light and let down your guard

Nobody’s soul can ever be scarred

Reviews

[Ahena MK]

The soul does forgive what the body remembers
Take leave of your mind and all its dark chambers
Look to the light and let down your guard
Nobody’s soul can ever be scarred
real good !!
ahena

[Giggling Star]

Thank you so much. I'm really enjoying the comments I'm getting on this write. So many different opinions. :)

[Frieda P]

Light and positive sentiments here for some/all that carry those scars, nicely pen'd stargazer.

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Thanks Frieda. A couple of reviewers disagree that a soul cannot be scarred. Its very interesting to hear other people's beliefs about the soul. Very enlightening. Thanks for the nice review.

[Frieda P]

I tend to think they can be, I wanted to comment on your sentiments and the poem instead, you're most welcome stargazer.

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Thanks for sharing that with me :)

[Frieda P]

Sure, usually when I voice my opinion people tell me to shut up..ha ;-)

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............. :)

[J. J. Nightingale]

GOTTA DISAGREE .. SORRY

JAZZ

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No problem. I'm always interested in hearing other people's point of view. If you have time and feel like it - let me know why :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

I just love this one, stargazer. Particularly the ending line...it's perfect!
There's a lesson imparted in me and I thank you for that, but...only time can tell.

This is a very relevant piece. Well-penned. Keep it up!

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Thank you so much for the wonderful review!

[Bri]

I like how you wrote this, you have a good way of expressing your emotions.

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Thanks Bri. I'm always happy to see you.

[Lyn Anderson]

for some reason my mind jumped to abused animals right away. But then again, is the pain not essentially the same? A great read.

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Interesting take on it. I went back an reread it through your eyes and I can see your reasoning. Thanks

[Scott Metro]

This is very pretty..you are an understanding soul.
The soul will not always carry the pain..I guess it's other parts of us that do..
Here..this day on earth..the only way to really release the pain is forgiveness ..
Lovely words Miss N.
Scott

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I don't believe the soul can have pain because there is no physical (as we know it) entity. There is nothing to form scars when all there is is air. Maybe I didn't get that across very well.

[Scott Metro]

You did get it across...I was just waxing
Scott

[Desiree]

Forgot to say great poem! Thanks Stargazer for another great one!

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Its just my own personal belief that a soul, which is an ethereal entity connected to God, is simply love, light and total understanding. Unfortunately, very few humans are able to connect.
Thank you for your kind words, and I hope I am right and the scars you feel on your soul will disappear.

[Desiree]

Thank you...

[Desiree]

I am thoroughly taken! Love the last two lines...unfortunately for me, a soul can be scarred however much I'd love that it could not have been. Sometimes healed but definitely remembered forever.