Young Blood

For the energetic youth who stands their ground to be successful in their life

Not much to regret,
But never have seen success..
Walking my own way,
To see if I'll win if I don't pray! 
To be undisputed, not disrespected..
To be the change , with all my rage!
I have that young blood..
Waiting to seize the moment,
Just keep your mouth shut,
And try living this moment!

Author's Note

Short poem.. It just came to me and I penned it down! :)

All your suggestions are welcome.. :)

Reviews

[zunie frost]

I have that young blood..
Waiting to seize the moment,
Just keep your mouth shut,
And try living this moment!

ending lines are really awsome my friend !!!!

[Coyote Poetry]

Outstanding advice shared.
"Waiting to seize the moment,
Just keep your mouth shut,
And try living this moment!"
The above lines. A good way to live. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Tiffany K Charles]

hhhhmmmmmm......... i see your imagery ....... nicely put....... i was hoping that you did another one... kinda like a part 2........

[The Novice]

Nicely done. I can relate to this poem

[andrew mitchell]

Yes the path is yours to take, live the moment. A nicely written poem

[Meeks]

I can't say I always live in the moment... and I can't say I would like too either, but great poem! (I disagree with poems a lot)

Nice style, interesting use of a commanding tone in certain areas to highlight. Hope you keep writing!

[Blackheart]

This was really good. Short and right to the point. I liked that.

[Dash the Reaper]

short but right on point.keep it up mate

[Emily]

I loved it!
Very well written!!
Keep on writing!

[matpat]

Very well done, I like it!