The Wait

Regret is the only word that could describe this one

Even when I tried to be anonymous,

You were the only one I didn't wanna miss.

Even when I was in a mess,

You always were intimate.

All the time I took to resuscitate,

You encouraged me to write my own fate. 

You always tried to pull the weight

Of my mind that always pulsate. 

I knew I was never an alternate,

Still I couldn't  give you all the faith.

Now,In my sins I always bathe,

For you to come back, I await.

Author's Note

Tried a more complex format in this one. Played with the words a little. ;)

For someone that I lost,someone important.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest and good emotion shared in the words.
"Now,In my sins I always bathe,
For you to come back, I await."
People who tempt us and leave us wishing. Are never forgotten. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you so much for your review. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Najam Us Saher]

I loved the flow and the rhythm of this poem.

[andrew mitchell]

life is all about lessons sometimes you don't get that second chance but you will remember for life.

[Aswin R Prasad]

Yes .. thank you for ypur review.

[Emily]

Lovely write!
Keep on writing!!

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you so much..

[zunie frost]

another great piece of work !!!
very nicely planned
i liked reading it

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you Zunie. Glad that you liked it. :)