My Best Friend’s Memories

this one is dedicated to my bestest best friend.....

My Best Friend’s Memories

 

I still remember the moment when we first crossed our paths,

The priceless thing that I could have ever achieved,

Is you my dearest heart.

 

You know how much I craved for you,

for you are my soul and heart.

That’s why I can never exist without you

But I would be a mere lifeless block.

 

I remember the time we used to laugh together.

Oh!! Your smile!

They baptize me with life.

I remember you used to pour all your advices on me.

Oh!! Your words!

They blossom my heart..

 

But now, it’s hard for me to live like before,

because now…I’m without my heart and soul.

It’s mirthful how fate had decided to separate us apart.

 

The distance between us is just in thousands kilometers

But it seems like a light year to me..

 

Oh!! How long I have to wait to see

Your endearing smile,

to take a glimpse of your mesmerizing eyes.

 

O my dearest friend…

All I have is just your memories within me

Which are keeping me alive,

Until the time we meet under the bright shade of sunshine.

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Brandon Mathis]

when we first crossed one another's paths
is to have you dearest to my heart
the distance between us is measured in kilometers
but it feels like many light years away
until the time we meet again
under the bright shade of sunlight

it is a good poem but this is what i would change

[Brandon Mathis]

i love it my fav part is You know how much I craved for you,
for you are my soul and heart.
That’s why I can never exist without you
But I would be a mere lifeless block. hey check out and review some of my poems please.

[Akhand Pratap Singh]

The way you said bestest best friend is just so sweet and shows how great your love for the friend is. About the poem, its heart touching and realistic, the emotions are just flowing in there, the pure and soulful love of two friends is next to none. The way you put them up is beautiful and elegant. I will pray GOD to let you have a meeting again with your such dear friend.

[The dark story]

i too wish for your prayers to come true someday soon

[Laura Maidah]

"I could have ever achieved" is actually proper. I double-checked. The rest is impeccable. Beautiful job!

[The dark story]

thank you for advice..i'll try not to make that mistake again..i am glad you liked it

[khalid]

sincere friends are really rare..you may share with a friend what you cant share with one of your own family..i liked the way you have written this..it shows how much you are sincere and loyal to your friends..

[The dark story]

I highly revere my Best friend and i wish we will meet again...