Five years of nothing

A friendship broken to a false love.

A day that comes is a day to start new. A friendship so dear a friendship that ended too. By day we came together and laughed and by night we shared are deepest thoughts. Your broken heart was being healed by the one who had been there through it all. Yet the days passed and we seemed to start to fall apart. A man came and suddenly we no longer were the same. You talked to him you did more with him suddenly I was a shadow. Till the day had came and you finally said you didn't care for what it's worth. A friendship last for no more than what its really worth. Five year we were so close five year seemed to be the most. Yet we fell apart all for a guy with no true heart. You picked a thorn instead of picking the rose. Next time maybe you'll see what five year of friendship really means.

Reviews

[Srchaud]

So this is a poem about being left behind. Certainly gives you the feeling of betrayel as some of the line feel very bitter(thats a good thing).
Any poem that makes you feel something is a good poem and it brought me to my younger days when my friends one by one faded as they became involved with there (true) love.

[August R Lalanne]

Thank you, with everything i create i put meaning and myself into it slightly this is a personal deep one for this is truthfully filled with emotional feelings.