Can Anybody Hear Me

A poem about loneliness and depression

Can anybody hear me
And all my muffled screams
I really want to be heard
I'm in need of some comfort

Can anybody hear me
And all my silent cries
Can anybody open my heart
And care to see what lies

Can anybody hear me
And all my suppressed fears
Can anybody wipe my eyes
Of all the silent tears

Can anybody hear me?

Can anybody talk to me
And quiet all this down
Can anybody hold me
Till I stop making a sound

Can anybody tell me
That its all gonna be okay
Can anybody come here
And drive all my insecurities away

Can anybody find out
What's wrong and put it right
I really need someone
Who'll listen and not fight

Can anybody hear me?

Can you hear me crying out
Hear me trying to reach out
Baby can you hear me scream?
Can you hear me so afraid
Dreaming of so far away
Baby can you hear me dream?

Can anybody hear me?
Can anybody hear me?
Can anybody hear me?

Reviews

[Kousika]

Hey .. great feel of lines..
I loved the lines and it's internal meaning..
Your repetition of lines "Can anybody hear me?"
You know it gave such an impact for your poem..
Keep going.. All the best..