Friendly Stars

Friendly Stars

A Poem by anon

Maybe I'd be happier on the moon. 
All alone.
Walking around with not one soul to bother me.
Not one soul to tell me another lie.
With the stars to keep me company, with the stars to be my friends.
The stars won't lie to me.

© 2017 anon


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I like MP's review on this one, I liked your thoughts in this piece and you worded everything so perfectly.. maybe just maybe...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

anon

7 Years Ago

Thank you!! So much!
i like the first word "Maybe". i dont think it would get lonely at this point either. The stars lie, the one that is suppose to lead us home lies all the time. Maybe the moon would be the one place we wont lie to ourselves.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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