I lost my smile

I lost my smile,

it stayed  awhile,

bu now i've lost it,

you stole it away,

you made me beleive,

that you would  stay

Author's Note

for all the broken hearts like mine

Reviews

[Wórdsmíth]

omg, there's so much depth, deepnesss'sssssssss, i liked your words but felt sad to read your heart has been broken...hey, don't worry you can paste your heart's piece;s again...(not a joke), just live your life n think about your future ok...you'll b recover very soon...
your this writin''s reflects damn much pain.

[chaotic katie]

thanks, i originally started writing to share my feelings this is just one of my venting pieces. writing and music help me through it, and i am feeling a bit better now, thanks for the concern :)

[Death Girl]

I wish I could do something to help. you know that I am here if you need me and you don't need him he is just a dumb a*****e who doesn't give a f**k. He can go f**k a landmine HAHA. please feel better

[chaotic katie]

our jokes lol :3

[Holly Mason]

sorry you have a broken heart
like the way you use your smile to reference your sadness
very well written
good title I had to know what you wrote
thank you for sharing hope you feel better

[chaotic katie]

thank you