~i remember asking you once~

~i remember asking you once~

A Poem by Grace

i remember asking you once;

“do you love me”

but for the life of me,

i can’t remember your reply

for as your lips parted to speak

soft wet kisses hit my cheek

my head tilted backwards

baring my throat to you;

 

the rest is our history~

© 2011 Grace


Author's Note

Grace
~Love is the only cure for most everything~
~Photo courtesy of Photobucket~

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how beautifully you frame a deep moment with words~

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very sweet, I loved it! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so lovely, I enjoyed your write

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

so sweet, so well written.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Definitely a nice piece...
short, sweet, simple - a secret...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brilliant, short simple and to the point. Good job sweetheart,

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Grace

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"Can you understand? Someone, somewhere, can you understand me a little, love me a little? For all my despair, for all my ideals, for all that - I love life. But it is hard, and I have so much - so ve.. more..

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