TONIGHT GOD

TONIGHT GOD

A Poem by azeilc
"

I write a prayer to remind myself why I care

"

I kneel down again because I wanna be with you

Im sorry for tonight

Im sorry for another fight

Im sorry I had to learn this way

By hurting you and making you feel astray

 

I need you

More than anything else I admit I really do

When the day ends, I close my eyes and turn to you

Because the truth is that it's the only thing I could really do

I need you

 

I pray to you

Sometimes I ask myself why I do

A lot of times I doubt these words

But it’s the strongest hope I ever learned

I pray to you

 

I love you

© 2011 azeilc


Author's Note

azeilc
Do you guys think this is good for a song??? :)

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Beautiful. I can relate and I can just feel the emotion.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow thanks :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


sincere and beautiful~

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I could tell; your heart really went into this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

okay, I'll stick to that ;) I was a bit upset writing this with things around me. I would have wanted to put some melody but I'm a bit busy these days so I;ll stick with writing more instead ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Perhaps for a short hymn. An actual song song? Probably not. It would be EXCELLENT for an opening/closing hymn. Keep this as your personal prayer. That's my best advice.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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