Hope

This is a poem for poets and one of the things that inspires them: HOPE

Birds fly above illusion

Lost but found themselves

They come and take the rain

Bring it back to heaven

 

Forever clouds feed

the mind of poets

The sea forever flows

The blue where sometimes

hope is lost

 

A dream found you

Lying in bed thinking of her

Thanking life for not being able

to fulfill your dreams

 

In

You found a flower

You named her hope

And together you live for

A couple of days……..

until she withered

a cloudy afternoon

Author's Note

Are you able to understand this poem? Does it need anything else to make it sound better?

Reviews

[carmen]

hope is beauty in its simplest form

[Harlow Aaron]

Wow, the words of this poem are very descriptive, very colorful! I loved this section the most:
A dream found you

Lying in bed thinking of her

Thanking life for not being able

to fulfill your dreams

For some reason, I just love it! I can't explain it! Hehe

[closed account]

Yes this is brilliant!! I love poems like this, it makes you think and with the thought *inpiration* comes out!! thanks for sharing..

[Face In A Crowd]

Who cares if you can't understand it? Poetry isn't about understand. It's about feeling and emotion. Which you did at an all time high.