hypothermia

hypothermia

A Poem by Babieegirl
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during camping, i almost went through hypothermia .

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Where was i to go?
My body so cold
The water seeping through everything
My body, shivering.
Where was i to go ?
No light to show me the way
and hours away from the day
Where could they take me?
How was i to get away?
The water seeping through.
3rd pair of clothes.
When was the light to show?!
My body was aching
and the temp was dropping.
What was i to do?
I lay in the water
the puddle,
the wind getting stronger.
I stand
holding myself,
cried to myself
sighed to myself.
collapsed to the floor
no light to show the door.
Closed my eyes.
imagined the fire.
Crackling down 
Growing tire,
The fire.
That was it.
Burning my knees
right where i sit.
Eating the wood.
Feasting and growing,
stronger and stronger,
as i grew weaker and weaker.
Sicker.
Burning to the top,
just to fall again.
That's where i was to go.
But even more wet.
Then i was saved.
Carried to a bed.
Hugged in the sheets,
Socks to cover my feet,
Waiting for my light,
and soon enough it came.
Where i was placed by the fire.
In which it looked the same.
It was almost.
Hypothermia.

© 2011 Babieegirl


Author's Note

Babieegirl
I went off beat b/c i couldn't fit the words in perfectly for myself. but idk, maybe you can still see my poem well. Even though i can't . =P

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