Believe In God Be Glorifyed

Just alittle something that I came up with about god who I really strongly believe in.

We all have dreams of love insight,

To believe that God bring us the light,

We have the chance to make that wish,

For God to give us things we want to charish,

We all are one as we can see,

God moves mountins and the seas,

So this is what I say to you,

Believe in God and what he says to do,

He said we must hold our toungs,

Hold him in are hearts cause God is Number one,

We must honor all the things God does,

For he is the healer that cures his sons,

He gives us trials for us to learn,

Thats why were here on this earth,

To become God's teachers to preach his words,

Dont let the devil take over our souls,

Be apart of god and his light,

He says my children do fear me tonight,

I will glorify all you lives,

Just believe in me all day and night.

Author's Note

My belief in god above..

Reviews

[Windy]

I don't usually comment on religion or politics because so many people fight about them but I really liked your poem and wanted to tell you so. I think it is wonderful to have such strong belief. ;)

[Pj]

You have such a strong faith and I felt that :D I think the reason for your success is because you always write from the heart and this is fantastic!
You will always have unique writings and you keep the readers excited because you always switch from one topic to another- and that pace is thrilling! :D

A lovely poem!

[Meghan Jack]

Very beautiful. Your piece really describes a pure belief in God. I feel this way too, and your piece was refreshing to read after reading another poem bashing religion in general. You may want to fix up a few glaring errors such as tongues is spelled wrong and you missed a apostrophe in 'we're'.

Thanks for sharing :)