Passion

desires that burn the heart like fire

Blistering passion of love's intensity

 

Burning my heart with flames of  sweet desire

 

For a man that holds me bound

 

Beyond the depths of my soul

 

Eternal

Reviews

[ron]

I beutiful peice about love holding one hostage. You penned this very well.

[Butch Decatoria]

MMM... things that make you go hmm... there are such beautiful wonder inbetween the lines... great piece...

[Angel's Lady]

and oh how bright that passion burns! Great write!

Intense,I did get more of a flow on this one,The power of Fire!

[Rockebah]

i love the choice of words and the intensity of love in this poem. Your goal to effectively draw the audience into your poem was achieved. Hope to read more from you.