Goodbye

A painful memory ..

Tears rolled down my cheeks,

Rain drops hit the ground

The thunderstorm begins and

 fading memories show up again

I shed so many tears for you,

I wrote so many poems for you

You'll never leave,

You promised! and all the secrets,all the memories

all the love and all the care

all of it faded out in the darkness

and all you gifted me with was pain

unheard and unsaid just one word finished it all

so here I am promising you my absence by saying just one word ''godbye!''

Author's Note

Hope you like it :D

Reviews

[Sue Hart]

I liked this. Very real. Sometimes life leaves you no choice but to move on. In this, you deftly explained how she was only responding to his choices. It was very well written. Good job.

[Rida Sarwar]

thank you :) actually this is for a friend, a very dear one she was :)

[Sue Hart]

What a wonderful thing to do.

[Rida Sarwar]

I know it hurts but now its better :)

[Saddam]

Never say goodbye when you love someone with all your heart.

[Rida Sarwar]

what to do when your heart has been crumbled and walked upon? how many times can you put your ego down?

[Saddam]

Not that mean you understand, my thinking is love is more powerful than anything. It has power to change any one's heart.

[Rida Sarwar]

My opinion changed a long time ago :)

[Saddam]

As you think but i'm not.

[Rida Sarwar]

Good for you dear,poet :)