PEARL.....
A Poem by
barricade
She truly is a pearl :)
P eep into her soul, through her gorgeous eyes... E xpressing all there is, separating truth from lies... A westruck by her playfulness, her words pure delight... R azzmatazzing lil smile, lights up the darkest night... L eaves you dazed , leaves you amazed, leaves you dreaming as well... before you know it, she's sure about it, she's charmed you with her spell.. ..
© 2013 barricade
Author's Note
breaking free from a writer's block...penned this down while I was stuck on a traffic signal...lol
Reviews
I admire women who are able to mesmerize men in such a way as this. Crazy how much power they have! Great writing always comes once writer's block is over.
Posted 9 Years Ago
I like how you rhymed "there is" with "playfulness". Great effort on working through a block.
Posted 11 Years Ago
I like how you rhymed "there is" with "playfulness". Great effort on working through a block.
There are some that have that charming personality that is too hard to resist.
Posted 11 Years Ago
There are some that have that charming personality that is too hard to resist.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
From the title, I was expecting something entirely different and explicit. But I like it - it's simple, but points for the use of razzmatazz.
Posted 11 Years Ago
From the title, I was expecting something entirely different and explicit. But I like it - it's simple, but points for the use of razzmatazz.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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