My words to you...

just a lil poem out to my love...I know you inside out hun...

You can shell that heart,

but you can't stop it from beating next to mine...

You can shut your eyes to me,

but you can't hide your soul from mine..

You can wear that mask,

but I still can see through,

down to the truest and the purest part of you...

I will be your sun,

I will be that light,

we'll handle those clouds,

come whatever might !

Reviews

[Stephanie]

"You can wear that mask,
but I still can see through,
down to the truest and the purest part of you..."

That's love! A love built off of years of friendship.
I'm with Beloved- If you 2 have finally spoken...
That's amazing! So happy for youu :]

And this is one amazing poem. It flows so well, right from the heart!

[Jillian Alexis]

i looove this. i've been here. when ur with someone who knows you no matter what or how much you try to hide. wonderful write~

[♡Moon Child♡..]

Hey!
Have you finally spoken to her????
That would be wonderful!

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Nicely penned.. I could feel such true and pure emotions flowing through your writing... enthralling that in such simplicity.. at the end I could feel such admiration that you feel something so deep for someone that you would like to help them overcome their cloudy days.. that is such a sweet heart and message to convey to your love of your life. Sometimes it's not the words but the actions in life that truly light our days! Such confidence flowed through this ... very well done!

[deeps]

This is such a wonderful and a sweet write here.
Very well expressed!