December 14, 2013, 2:08 a.m.

December 14, 2013, 2:08 a.m.

A Poem by Renae.
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I'm not sure if this actually counts as a poem, but its an entry straight from my own personal journal, and it best suites the poem category, in my own opinion.

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The smell of your cologne haunts me
It no longer lingers in my room
Its been months of trying to eliminate it
Its been 10 months alone
My skin misses you
My heart cries your name for hours
At the sight of the moon.
But the pieces are barely held together by the seams.
And I can't breathe the same air anymore
I can't breathe at all
But when I can and my brain starts to work
I remember the way it smelled
I remember your room
The mess
The homeliness I felt in the dark
A humid day
And your bony frame holding me
And you kissing me for the first time
No fireworks or moment of complete silence
But a spark
Your lips are matches
And my lips the breathe flames to keep people out
You lit a fire between us
The first time I was ever on fire
And you tried to extinguish me
Out went our flame
Out went my own flame
But the embers still burn strong
Burning up the rest of me
Until I'm nothing but ashes

© 2014 Renae.


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This is absolutely amazing! Such powerful feelings in your words and I too, have been there and relate to exactly what you have written. The longing and the sadness that seems all consuming and unbearable leaves you a wreck, yet such beautiful writing comes from it. Thank you for sharing.

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This is absolutely amazing! Such powerful feelings in your words and I too, have been there and relate to exactly what you have written. The longing and the sadness that seems all consuming and unbearable leaves you a wreck, yet such beautiful writing comes from it. Thank you for sharing.

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