What if

what if

my happy

is everybody else's

stay home

cry in bed

take a blade to their skin

what if

my sane

is everybody else's

"you should see someone"

and breaking down

without warning

what if

my healthy

is everybody else's

too sick to stand

Reviews

[Kathrin S]

What an interesting poem. I like the way that the meaning isn't completely evident, but still one is able to figure it out.

Maybe you could break it up into 3 stanzas, so that each 'what if' is the beginning of a new one? That might work - but isn't absolutely necessary.