Embrace.

Perfectly intertwined
My legs wrapped around yours
And yours around mine
No inch of skin left untouched
The skin of your back so smooth
My hands can't help but keep moving
And grabbing when it feels right
Your chest firmly pressed against mine
Our hearts no longer beating alone
But beating as one, caught in the moment
Our arms no longer controlled by us
But they already know what to do
And where to go
In amongst the heavy breathing
A gentle wet kiss seals the moment
While our bodies become one
In the most passionate embrace.

Reviews

[Sultrysoul]

I love this poem just the transition of one moment into anther. The love and passion can be felt here. Great poem

[bathtime]

Thank you! I appreciate your comments :)

[Sultrysoul]

You are welcome my friend :)

[Misery]

There is a poet in Manitoba and a wild fire within the poet.

[bathtime]

Thank you :)

[Misery]

You are welcome.

[Nightfeather]

'Making love' can be one of the most beautiful things that live can provide someone. The moment when two lovers become not two but one, temporary everlasting happiness is embedded in the heart of the two lovers. This poem is very well written and it shows the world that 'making love' is one of the most epic aspects of life (when done right) ;)

Good job :D

[bathtime]

It definitely can be one of the most epic moments of life. I'm glad you enjoyed the piece. Thanks!

[Nightfeather]

No problem :)