Your heart is with me

A message of love, could be a hallmark card.

Your heart is with me, deep within my heart

Locked away within my soul

Your heart is with me, deep within

Your heart strikes true within

For only me

You are my world, I fear no fate

You are beautiful, my world

The days and nights with you

Always sing to me, I fear no fate

Your heart is with me, holding my deepest secret

Beneath the stars I sit at night, under the tree of life

The tree that grows stronger, higher than any other

With glimpses of stars above

I hold that special secret deep within my soul

My heart, Your heart strikes, My heart

Breathing as one, together, locked as one

Reviews

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

I don't agree it could be a hallmark card, it's much more. The first impression I had when I read this poem, was that it read a bit as a song, a love song. It's the repetition of a word or sentence that gives that effect. I like that, but be aware to not overdo that. I really enjoyed reading it.

[B.J]

Wow thank you for your comment and encouragement

[Sami Khalil]

What a beautiful title and poem. Your romance is deep in nature and the spirit. Excellent, sir....:)......

[B.J]

Thank you kind sir, It was nice to know that I could still feel enough to write it.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure. Any time...:).......

[B.J]

:)...........................

[Sami Khalil]

C:)......................