To lift spirits

A lone wanderer passes by

A gleaming shape

For a gentle heart

With a vision

For living in paradise

A shadow passes over

A lonely heart

I know you are wandering about

I feel your air breeze past

A gleaming light catches my eye

My spirits are mourning

My life immune to my feelings

I wait patiently for you

To lift my spirits

I know you are waiting for me

I am a lonely wanderer

With a vision of life

Spirit filled

Looking for a light to share

I am here

A shadow lurks behind

Though devastating

Haunting

My time will survive

I will bring myself to love

To live and die in my life

To laugh at life 

My spirits rise 

A lone wanderer

Found the light of life

A gentle heart

With a vision

Will no longer live in despair

Reviews

[Bina]

Hauntingly vibrant. You paint a picture of a stark reality which draws the reader in. It puts then in the story. Lovely!

[B.J]

Thank you for your kind review, I was not well when I wrote that one. My body was in turmoil then. I am hoping to lift my writing to a lighter level now.

[Bina]

awwwe *hugs you* may you feel better

[B.J]

I am certainly finding my way now. All in a new world.

[Jamestown]

I have to agree, the darkness will always try to shade the light, but key word is
"Try" when this happens we must reach further toward the light, cause darkness
devours the weak, good write!

[B.J]

Thank you so much for your kind words

[W R Stowe]

No matter how far into the light we travel seems the dark shadow will follow us though at a distance just waiting for the right moment to try and overshadow us.Stay going forward into the light darkness doesn't like the light and knows that not everyday can be sunny.Fool him paint the sun upon the sky on those cloudy days.Good job

[B.J]

Thank you for a great review

[W R Stowe]

You share your deep felt feelings within your writing and that's courageous your quite welcome

[B.J]

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