Mirrored reflections

Fields of green

Beds of roses

Bloom all around

For me and you and you

There for all to see

In this exciting world

Mirrored, reflections,

Glisten, skies so blue

A sea of white clouds

Mirrored, reflections,

A bright clear day

Emerges from a dark night

For all to see

In this exciting world

So pretty , so delicate,

A sea of smiling faces

All the colours of a rainbow

Friends mingle

I see babes in arms

I hear them gooo, and gaa,

Growing each day

So much to learn

I'll never know what they know

It is and exciting world

Mirror reflections

A world so bright

(c)bjsscribbles

Reviews

[Karmee]

This is really awesome,
Excellent wording skills, you're a very talented writer,
keep writing always

[B.J]

Thank you for your kind words, I see a few errors in this. I have not been online for some time

[Einstein Noodle]

reading blesses me with a certain peace that comes from our very real connection to the world around us and to each person ... it makes the Good Lords admonitions to love neighbors as our own self more easily understood ... and in the recent words of Pope Francis .. our shared citizenship and responsibility to care for the natural world as well ... some minor editing in these lines "A see of smiling faces" and "It's and exciting world" very minor to be sure ... i also like the repetition of the title .. it brings my focus back to that deep truth about what we see ... our own reflection ... wow! its a lot to ponder in a tranquil state of wonderment :)))
E.

[B.J]

I have been sick for some time and just getting back to looking at a few of my pieces on the web. Thank you I will check out the errors. And a late thank you for your comment

[Einstein Noodle]

i am glad you are feeling better ..hope it was not too serious

[B.J]

It was a long haul and everything is ticking over nicely, now. The Aussie hospital system can muck you around. Causing long term pain control and side effects. A new hip later, now back on track

[Einstein Noodle]

ouch!!! glad you got it fixed ..thats a pretty serious operation .. lots of muscle to get through .. i am a retired RN and getting people up and moving asap was always an important part of rehab ... top o' the marhnin' to ya! ;)

[B.J]

Yes I been walking since day one and got myself agile again, those months were very dark for me now I am looking forward tom a holiday for a week by the beach at then end of this month.

[Einstein Noodle]

ahhhhhhhhhhh a week at the beach ..just what the doctor ordered eh!?? peace joy and healing

[B.J]

:)...................

[W R Stowe]

We sometimes can see better from another's point of view than our own. Reflection is often our only vantage point nice play on your words

Bill

[B.J]

Thank you for your kind words

[W R Stowe]

your quite welcome

Bill