Christmas

I smell the fire

the happiness

the jingling of bells

the laughs and excitement everywhere

the shopping and singing

bringing people together or ripping them apart.......

Reviews

[Felicity's Eve]

I really like the twist at the end. It makes you consider that possibility and is something good to ponder about while just daydreaming or something. ^^

I've been sick for a year (the doctors can't figure it out) so being home-schooled and locked in the house :/, I have lots to time to daydream. :)

Wonderfully written. ^^

[Art Lover/Love Writing]

thanks hope you get better :(

[Felicity's Eve]

We are going to Mayo Clinic this January so I hope the can figure it out. Being in pain and having a fever 24/7 is not fun for anyone... -.-"

All I have now are my books, music, writings, drawings, and daydreams of course. ^^

[Art Lover/Love Writing]

aww I feel bad hope u get better dotn forget meds :)

[Felicity's Eve]

Lol I stopped taking them because they either backfire (and make everything worse and I never totally recover from the side-effects) or they do not work at all. -.-"

[Art Lover/Love Writing]

thats upsetting but benadryl and motrin help with fevers :|

[Art Lover/Love Writing]

I use to get sick 24/7 because of humungous tonsils

[Felicity's Eve]

That sounds awful I'm sorry. :,(

The thing with me was I hardly ever got sick, and when I did it was really BAD. -.-"

So this has not been fun. I personally think that something is up with my immune system.

[Art Lover/Love Writing]

I got them out so yippie eeh sounds awful that could be it my uncle says ur immune system is a dinosaur mines a bunny rabit LOL

[Felicity's Eve]

LOL XD

[Art Lover/Love Writing]

I know he's actual in the room watching the cowboys game making jokes about potassuim WITW

[Felicity's Eve]

Lol XD

[Art Lover/Love Writing]

Lol

[Felicity's Eve]

:)

[RachelReaper]

agreed with the last line, its either quite holly jolly how its described earlier in the poem, with singing and laughing and that. Or, you could be unlucky and you have to deal with *shivers* your crazy family.

[Art Lover/Love Writing]

Good thing is my family is not like that! But I have seen some like that*whistles*

[lollilove12]

at first it's all smiles and giggles,bunnies and rainbows and then POW! ,no more rainbows . -_-

[Mark Anthony Games (Hum..]

Wonderful last line, The only time families seem to get together is funerals and christmas!! Great little piece this.

[Art Lover/Love Writing]

thanks hehe dont forget thanksgiving

[Mary]

well spoken.

[Art Lover/Love Writing]

thank you

[Dr. Wood ?]

Only Christmas, it seems, has that power

[Art Lover/Love Writing]

very true but I havev always loved christmas

[Frieda P]

Short poem with lots of impact. Truer words were never spoken. Well done...

[Art Lover/Love Writing]

thank you

[Tree]

I like this poem, the truth. It is how this time of the year can be. That last verse was a hard crisp slap to the face, as poetry should be sometimes. It felt good

[Art Lover/Love Writing]

thank you I got this from when my dad said he doesnt like to go shopping at christmas time because people have lost sight of the true meaning of christmas and thanks I didnt know if the ending would be to sudden or just right