Flutter

Flutter

A Poem by BLBrown

driving home from work

               exhausted


perpetually red stoplight

               exhausted


lionel ritchie on the radio

               exhausted


heavy tree-lined street

               exhausted


traffic and resounding horns

               exhausted


first baby flutter in my belly

exhilarated!


©2012 Barbara Brown

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05/26/12

© 2012 BLBrown


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Love the twist!
It is so true isn't it? God's way of helping us through the constant tired feeling, the hints of joy offered on what is to come. I still remember the first time I felt both of my babies move in my belly. And later as they grew I loved the feeling of my kids kicking and moving about. Well, except SJ when he was bigger... he decided to plant his foot (or feet) under my rib cage and kick like crazy!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Yes - I always knew she was doing okay if she was kicking. I would balance an empty plastic coffee cup on my stomach and it would topple one way, then the other, and on a few occasions fly across the room as if she were scoring a goal!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Love the twist!
It is so true isn't it? God's way of helping us through the constant tired feeling, the hints of joy offered on what is to come. I still remember the first time I felt both of my babies move in my belly. And later as they grew I loved the feeling of my kids kicking and moving about. Well, except SJ when he was bigger... he decided to plant his foot (or feet) under my rib cage and kick like crazy!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 26, 2012
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BLBrown
BLBrown

VA



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Hello, my name is Barbara. Writing is my calling in life. It took me awhile but I've finally answered. I will write anything, poetry, ditties, short stories, and am currently also working on a .. more..

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