Love Suicide

Streams of blood are my tears

The fix for all of my fears

No one can understand

What makes me who I am

 

Never did I know

A sickness in me

Sweeter than this ecstasy

(Is it love?)

 

Sweet embrace

Came too late

And now my fire dies

Still I wait

Contemplate

But what, I do not know

 

Soft touch

Sugar rush

Fireflies

Crimson lies

 

Will you be mine

Will you be mine

 

Who am I to say will we fly or fail

If time is all we have then time will only tell

 

Cliffs up on mountains so high

Deep blue seas down below

Sunlight never reaches their depth

I take a step off the edge

 

And I leap

From the safety

Of everything I knew

And I fall

Into a sleep

Forever

        Forever

 

I took a chance

I plunged head-first

Who knows if I'll make it out alive

 

Sweet embrace

Came too late

But now it's here to stay

I can not wait

Concentrate

For time that I want now

 

Let's commit out love suicide

Author's Note

These are lyrics to a song that one of my friends & I wrote... He still doesn't know that we wrote them, though. He sent most of it in a letter & gave me permission to mess with it... So I kinda did... It's not that good, but it's alright I guess. It's still a work-in-progress...

Reviews

[Ian]

Wow!
This would certainly make a wondrful song!
Very well written!
It has a great rhythm!
Awesome lyric!
Very powerful and full of emotions.