FT

A little rough, but it works.

A feeling so strong

Can barely hold on

What is it?

Burning within me.....

Love?

No. More.

Lust? Not quite

What then?

This feeling that makes me move

Makes me move like never before

Dance in ways I never could before

So strange

I think it is something I want

Confusion overload

.....a word I need

Stronger than JUST love

Not lust..... not quite

I think this fiery temptation

Passion

Reviews

[Bran the Broken]

Hmm. could be edited a little, better worded, but overall, good core of longing emotion, and confusion and wonder...good job.

[Jordan Punga]

I liked how you put lust as a stronger feeling than love.