Elementals, all the way up to chapter 13
A Book by Brandon
 A story combining Harry Potter and Percy Jackson into a subject not yet touched, Elementals. There are a couple grammatical mistakes that I have not corrected yet.  © 2011 Brandon
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Ignore Grammar problems. Unfortunately the dialogue was squished in here, try to enjoy. :) I have a friend artist that is working on all the characters.
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It seems that you have an interesting story going here, but it would be a lot easier for others to read if you broke it up into chapters using the "book" feature and separated out the paragraphs. You should be able to do that under the "manage writing" tab. Good start though.
Posted 13 Years Ago
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It seems that you have an interesting story going here, but it would be a lot easier for others to read if you broke it up into chapters using the "book" feature and separated out the paragraphs. You should be able to do that under the "manage writing" tab. Good start though.
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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I enjoy writing about fictional characters and stories, I'm also a big gamer. more..
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