satisified red

rumble  ---

helllooooo

hellloooo

 

the mountains shake

and return

my calls

 

only crow answers

and

takes his seat with me

in these

red

rock

halls

 

rabiit

on a stick

 

and  lizard

 

and

 

a sip of the

water

 

purified in

the

red and blues

of the

sage brush

fire

 

the water 

 still

smolders

with

the killing

heat

 

but

it

wets

my throat

 

Ahhh

 

down it

tumbles

 

and the shadows

slide

across

my

face

and the sun

 

 

satisfied

Reviews

[Chris]

I like the content and the thoughts but the delivery method - well THAT is just me and preference I guess.