Rain Drops

Rain Drops

A Poem by bela
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Rain Drops Story

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rain

drops fell

down inside

the flowers heart

which is dark deep.

landed on a leaf tip

glistening when

sun peeked out

through the

falling

rain

© 2015 bela


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I like how you shaped this poem as a rain drop and your poem is beautiful

Posted 1 Year Ago


Am a lover of such creative poems these days! It feels great when it reads smoothly with a true meaning and a satisfying shape alongside...I know you've given your best in it....Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Gentle, wonderful and true words written. I did like the poem. Thank you bela for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


What a beautiful flow of a story, of rain singing over the earth. The form is perfection.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Beautifully created design, bela, and, also, contains such graphic moments in time. Thank you so much for sharing your skills.

Posted 1 Year Ago


nice imagery,nice form great write ..

Posted 3 Years Ago


bela

3 Years Ago

Thank you for reading. I am glad that you like my poem
 wordman

3 Years Ago

you`re welcome,it is unique
Thank you Tazeen for the review. I appreciate the time you review my poem

Posted 3 Years Ago


That's really creative!
The way you hv described the journey of a rain drop is quite interesting!!
Keep writing 😃

Posted 3 Years Ago


This si nice imagery here.. I liked the flow :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Bela this poem is magnificent - the images captured my heart!

Posted 4 Years Ago



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Added on November 16, 2015
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bela
bela

dhaka, Bangladesh



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I am Bela, I am an amateur writer. It took time and great effort before I could say those words out loud. I like reading, reviewing especially the poems. more..

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