a growing boy

a growing boy

A Poem by bellastella

   he needs her to conform to

because    he is a

                          nebulous  being

half-hearted attempts

at a philosophical goal

    but to be happy

           content

         comfortable

he needs a little spoon

  to mold around  like wax

eventually

            he will harden

and be allowed to stand       alone

but does he want her to be his  

          muse

       his shape

     his essence

© 2008 bellastella


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wow very nice. i like the pattern you used. This gives me passion. Heck your peice of work explodes with passion. PLease send me a message telling me how you got the idea for this.

P.S. except me friends request.

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Added on November 26, 2008

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I am a sophomore in college and I am majoring in Spanish with a minor in Studio Art. I might add a creative writing minor... don't even ask what I want to do with that combination, I have no clue. It .. more..

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