About Her

Im just improvising as I go along....so....yeah.....this just was a spur of the moment thing....

At random moments in the day

I will take a moment and go out of my way

to pause and smile and think About Her

What is she doing?

Perhaps she's shooing

her brothers out the door

so she can focus for an hour or more

What is she thinking?

Perhaps she's winking 

at a guy on the street

Who's far luckier than me

What is she wishing?

As she's hoping and fishing

for the right kind of fish/man

to forever hold her hand

What is she hoping?

Or maybe she's moping

Cause she simply cannot

stop thinking of me

It has to be bad

for my health,or something like that

Cause I spend so much time thinking About Her

I can do better

at writing this poem

than writing my letters

to her house or her home

I'm so unromantic

In fact it's funny to see

My insane little antics

To try and make her like me

I can try all I want

But all I'll get is a taunt

Cause though she always makes fun

I hope she loves me too when the day is done

It's not for free

the time that we have

Hope she spends it thinking about me

As much as I spend it thinking About Her.

Author's Note

This is pretty terrible I know....I havent done poetry in a long time though.k..cut me some slack....

Reviews

[LovelySparrow]

This is quite adorable I must say. I like the fact that "About Her" is capatolized in all cases. It makes it that much more important about how much he feels about her.

I don't think he could do much better in writing this poem. :)
Amazing job.

[benjammingham]

Thanks. People like my sister say I am really cheesy and I guess I am, but most of my stories and poems are about me...and this other girl...
But yeah this idea stemmed from the fact that I spend way too much of my free time thinking about her....

[LovelySparrow]

It is very cheesy, but as a girl, I enjoy that fact because some people let cute things like this for granted or ignore them all together. I know the feeling about thinking about someone too much :P

[benjammingham]

lol it aint easy being cheesy....
yeah people take that stuff for granted all the time
The girl in this poem has a page on here too...shes my friend...named Jules....she definitley doesnt take it for granted haha

[LovelySparrow]

Haha, I know. People make it so tough to be sweet.
And yea? She writes? I would love to check out her page.
I'm glad she doesn's take it for granted :)

[benjammingham]

Her name is Jules.
Yeah...in seventh grade I made a mixtape with my own song on it and gave it to a girl for christmas after she already knew I liked her. And she broke it in half. I quote, "Interesting that CDs dont shatter when you break them."