The big question

The big question

A Poem by Benson Osuji
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A poem about the meaning of love

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What is love?
When there is no peace
It is just like an undying rumor
Proudly spread
But true love is quite different
because its a smile in hard times
A speech in confidence
That is sane
Truly you can never love
Without quarrels
If there haven't been hard times
Love is not made
But in all these what is love
For I do not know
for past experience have shown me
Love can fade 
  

© 2015 Benson Osuji


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Benson Osuji
Tell me what you sincerely think

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Your words written true and honest.
"Truly you can never love
Without quarrels
If there haven't been hard times
Love is not made"
Love is hard work and 50 years together. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


Such a big question indeed.
And some formulated answers just wont fit to actual life.
nice write! ☺

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benson Osuji

8 Years Ago

Thanks for your concern
Love, is a watered down emotion. It has been much over used where and when unnecessary. It no longer carries any chutzpah!
What you require here Benson, is Passion. Passion is the end all!




Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benson Osuji

8 Years Ago

thank you for your review I'll put your suggestions into concideration
sincerely, this poem is very migrating, it could go somewhere, i feel as if it's unfinished," For I do not know
for past experience have shown me
Love can fade "
i can really relate to this

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benson Osuji

8 Years Ago

Thanks thinking of collecting all my poems and putting them as an anthology
FaeryQueen

8 Years Ago

keep going!
Benson Osuji

8 Years Ago

thought you guys at writers cafe could be my editors

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Otukpo, Benue, Nigeria



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