Every blemish, every flaw.

Every blemish and every flaw he kissed passionatly.

I lay there, wondering what I did to deserve him.

 

Then finally.

Finally he looked into my eyes and there was that grin.

That perfect grin.

 

He wrapped his arms around my frame.

He whispered in my ear, "I love you."

 

I could hear those words over the tapping on the roof from the rain.

And that's when I knew.

 

I was in love,

thank God from above.

Reviews

[A Risen Heroine.]

Oh my gosh!
I can relate to this poem!!!
This is so beautiful written!
How I love it!
Thank you so much for sharing and keep up the awesome work! :D

~A Fallen Heroine~

[Chelsea]

beautiful(:

[Marie Harrison]

What a beautiful moment that was! Often we live for moments like those. Beautiful!

[Jim Parson]

Very beautifully said. Ain't love grand? It is, according to this. Well done!

[Christopher]

I enjoy this poem. It's nice to read an upbeat love poem. Very well done. :)

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ahhh..lovely sentiment..long may it last :)

[D S Rollins]

So much said in such a short period of time. This is beautiful.

[Michael]

Its an awesome feeling when you realize that you have fallen in love...I love reading pieces of work like this...nice write