DARLING

I KNOW WHAT YOU WANT

The palest pebble rolling up and down 

with each wave and tide..

The gleaming white-shelled oyster opens to you,

Its precious pearl yours for the taking...

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A virgin bride opens to your pleasure, at your bidding,

The treasure taken by her handmaiden...

Your desires are shattering...

Earth shaking...

Reviews

[Arundass TP]

Nicely written poem 😁 Enjoyed reading

[Dessi]

Your reviews are so much appreciated, Arundass TP.

[Dessi]

So the reader will know: This is about The Story Master.
His pleasure includes two women...together.

[John the Baptist]

I've known a lot of brides, but none of them were virgins. Of course, I arrive late for a lot of things.

[Dessi]

Hi JTB, the point is that HE wants twisted things above my love for him. Thanks so much for reviewing.

[Vol]

Dessi,
Hmmm. can you take what has been freely given... that kind of pearl is just as valuable either way...
Vol

[Dessi]

Thank you so much for your comment, Vol.

[Twilight]

Nice. There is something about the coast, sea; and crashing waves along a shoreline.

The waves tease, tickle and can play upon a shore; sometimes gradually building - building unto a tumultuous climax (during nature's stormy moments).

Yes, as you imply - passionate desires can be earth-shaking; and shatter one's core (in a powerful and unique human ecstasy)...

A pearl can be moist, and glisten with moisture. All natural, and tempting.

[Dessi]

Your review, sir, is erotic and slowly building the vision to an unrelenting peak... I curtsy to your magnificence. My pleasure completely. Oh my.

[Barry Sanders]

Personally, I love your insanity.

[Dessi]

Personally, this was meant for THE STORY MASTER.
Thanks for you review.

[Barry Sanders]

You are the only true STORY MASTER though. Are you writing yourself off here or what dolled face?

[Barry Sanders]

(if you need help writing yourself off... i'm always available you know)

[Dessi]

Go to the dead stones, Davidgeo

[Barry Sanders]

I'm just glad we're still kind of friendly, friend-o