DO YOU REMEMBER

The day we got our lines crossed and 

I was starving and thirsting for you

The tense desire not lost...and

You wanted me so bad,

Too.

.

For one fraction of a second

I thought we would finally meet.
The plans for you were in motion...

The outcome so sweet, so sweet.

.

But destiny played the b***h that day.

I'll never get another chance

To have you all to me in my way.

We'll never get that dance.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

I so enjoyed reading your poem. Any time one can stir emotions in their art and move others that is a gift as a writer. One can feel an unfulfilled love within these words and be moved to sadness. In what could have been. Very nice work. CLE

[Dessi]

It's strange how the words that just spill out seem to be the ones that work. Thanks for reviewing and commenting. Much appreciated.

[The Unknown Sith]

This is good. Sad but, good.

[Dessi]

Hi The Unknown Sith, Ever watch Final Destination? Same result reached many ways. I lost that opportunity but some things just are not meant to be. Thanks so much for reviewing and commenting.

[Trace]

Nicely written poem. It happens all the time in life so many lost opportunities. I could count mine on both hands, for several weeks.

Trace

[Dessi]

Hello Trace, I have not a "trace" of doubt you absolutely could do that. Things just kind of do or don't work out, right? Thank you for stopping by ;)