I Feel You

I can't help breaking my promise..I'm sorry

I can tell you are in the room.

Goosebumps ripple across my flesh

From head to toe, I feel excitement

Nothing can compare.

I can feel your breath in my hair,

On the back of my neck, behind my ears...

You are moving side to side to entice me,

My breathing is quickening, I hear you moan low.

You won't actually touch me, though I beg in silence,

Closing my eyes, I can see you as you are,

My memory serves me well, 

My imagination removes your glasses.

You are almost blind without them 

Your hands find every inch of me,

My hands find every inch of you...

Our breaths and bodies unite and we meld together....................................................................................

Reviews

[Paul Michael Kelly]

Very well written. Hemmingway would be proud.
Simple, to the point, evocative, dancing, step by step towards a definite place.

[DESSI]

@Paul Michael Kelly I appreciate that. My sister chastises me for being too blunt so I'm working on smoothing the edge a bit. Thanks again.

[Thomas W Case]

Superb work.Erotic and sensual.

[DESSI]

Just for you my dear friend, this work is about a very shy guy and my efforts to bring him out. Thanks for your comments. Always.

[Trace]

Very nicely written. Very enticing, very simple, yet, very 🔥 HOT. I like it when words inspire the mind and soul to action.

Beautiful poetry
Trace

[DESSI]

Thanks for reading and commenting. I do so appreciate.