Beautiful mess

better than no mess at all:-)

As I look out my window to nothing at all,at this moment in time I feel so small.Raindrops fall on the window pane,as my mind turns and turns,am I going insane.My thoughts are racing,but several things are clear,I want you,I miss you,I need you near.

 

The silence is so loud,I can hear my heart beating,my brain seems torn,it feels as if its bleeding.Every moment your away,everytime you go,you're all I need and I just wanted you to know.

 

Suddenly loneliness scares me to death,my nerves are uneasy,and i'm out of breath.should I scream or just keep it inside,such emotion as this,is so hard to hide.

 

I want to laugh,then I want to cry,I need you so much,I may never know why.As I think of the man that you need me to be,my eyes clear up,and now I can see,the man that you make me in your own special way,without you here,is to wither away.

 

As I laydown to try and sleep,to myself I confess,I find I'm in the middle,of a beautiful mess.

Reviews

[CAPOLAVORO]

I love this one poeticme. You are really good at love poems. :)

[Jessica Lima]

How lovely!!! I am not a fan of the body structure of the poem but what it says and how it flows got me hooked.

[Poeticme]

Well maam, I'm glad that I hooked you with it, yeah I wrote it in rough draft and just left it alone, sometimes perfection is in the eye of the beholder, as in beauty, thanks you for stopping in and reading it, and for your kind words as always

Poeticme

[Dr. YumnaKay]

The title in itself is beautiful! I liked how you brought anew the emotions through good flow. I enjoyed this piece. Nicely penned 👍😊

[Poeticme]

I'm glad that you enjoyed it, thank you for your kind words, it was inspired by a song titled Beautiful Mess

Poeticme

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome! It was a pleasure reading this 😊

[Najam Us Saher]

You have very wonderfully described your every emotion. I could feel it.

[Poeticme]

Thanks you so much for your time and kind words, poetry is to be felt, my poetry comes from my heart, so it's always full of emotion
Poeticme

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes that's true you're welcome ☺

[MoriartyMesa]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cyJhq_0yhtY

Your translation brought my mind to that music

[Angel's Lady]

What a beautiful mess I'm in!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SJpmYApfBIo

I can so relate to this! I can't think straight; I can't concentrate! What a great write!

[Catie_Marie]

This is beautiful. I absolutely love it! I can soo relate to this and its something very hard that people have to face in life.

Keep up the good work! :]

[Windy]

Beautiful poem. I actually felt like you were inside my head, & heart, (except in reverse as I am a female). I can appreciate just what you are saying and the title it perfect! Adding to my favorites.