Voice of descent

 

 

Acid and oil-a mad mans face

Insanity and inferred flow

The peal of vision

A spectacle your eyes bear not

 

Too dull to witness

Past their prime

Walked a jaded line

Razors edges left their lie

Blindness a falsified notion

 

Reasons you can’t discern

Illusions to allusions

Your density prevents

Harper of useless cords

 Blackening the beaming truth

Jar of obscenity-in your eye

You are a syllabic cripple

 

Honey and sty are same

Both a shame and pity

Your petty ignorance

Dim wit-see fit

Educate your misgivings  

 

 

Reviews

[Clouded in Hopeful Illu..]

This is a very well thought out piece. It clearly states the point that you are trying to make without confusing the audiance. Thank you very much for sharing this.

"a mad mans face" --- I do believe it should be man's.