Sojourn

Sojourn

A Poem by The Elder Pine

 

 
In the dead of night
Shades a fallen
Sunken birth
There! In the creator!
 
Cranial memory abstract
We can leave it there
The fetus-cold never dies

© 2008 The Elder Pine


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Not sure I understand this HR. I get the impression it could be the birth of a dark thought perhaps. It does, however, sends chills through my spine and that was well worth the read for that. Interesting piece.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice read. i enjoy the darker, moody atmospheric feel that it brings. kudos.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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The Elder Pine
The Elder Pine

Death Valley, PA



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Writing is my savior. It has become my outlet and my release, as well as my greatest passion. I dream of a career as a poet, possibly sprinkling in a few novels along the way. I operate on two levels.. more..

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