Why?

Why?

A Poem by Kayla W.
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i wrote this poem a few days ago. i was super depessed and i did end up cutting myself but i'm trying my best to get through this. i just feel like no one cares......

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As my tears fall

They burn the cuts on my wrist

 

Yeah, you heard me right

But you probably don’t care

You don’t shed tears

And your wrists are bare

 

But I know that you see it

And I know you ignore it

You pretend that I’m ok

And walk away and say, f**k it

 

I can’t make you love me

I can’t make you be my friend

But I want you to remember

My blood is on your hands

© 2010 Kayla W.


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Very dark, with such emotion and honesty. Flows very well. Great poem and I hope you can work through that, life is really rough.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is an excellent poem. It brings up such dark emotions, anger and hurt are all over it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow this is really dark. It really feels like you are attacking the reader and that makes it very real. An excellent evoking poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Kayla W.
Kayla W.

Nashville, TN



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