As i look at this world

As i look at the this world
I think to my self
What if, what if
What could have been
I need you, i want you
I pray to the heavens above
If only you could see and hear
my heart
It sings a tune of love only for you
If only you new
As i look at this world

 

Author's Note

ignore my grammar

Reviews

[A. Siemens]

Ok, grammar ignored. ;) Actually your grammar wasn't that bad. I really like your poem. It was short and simple with room to imagine. I've read too many poems chalked way too full of descriptions and explanations. Personally, I'm not a big fan of those. They overload my mind too much. Anyway, good job!