Dont walk away

Dont walk away

Don't walk away! Please give me one more day. Being
here without you.It makes me blue. I can't beleave iam feeling
this way! I beggin you please stay! Your holding the keys.
How can i just set you free. Hereing the anger in your voice.
Please i cant make this choise! Dont walk away! Please
give me one more day. Looking back on at all the years.
Its what i fear! I dont want to be here alone. Forever lost
in a zone. Laying here looking up at the stars! wondering if
if your from mars. Down on my knees! Beggin god please!
Dont walk away! Please just give me one more day

 

Reviews

[fallen_sueanne]

This is really sad and I definitly know the feeling of losing someone you can't bear to lose. You did a really good job with this and I really like it. Keep writing pieces like this, even though they can be sad. Yet again, I say good job for this ;)

Check my writing too, please and thank you!

-fallen_sueanne