When Quitting Time Comes

When Quitting Time Comes

A Poem by Footprints al carbon
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Jan 5 2016 7:20pm

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When time is weighed against a frame,
in passage to tomorrow's domain,
some days will shine but most will be,
between the void and memory.

My job right now is something slow,
a crawl of sorts a place to go,
with those who claim it is a race,
I will not try to keep up pace.

To run me down with prod and horn,
is not the purpose which I was born,
and though it seems to aggravate,
it gives no chance for to inflate.

My strength is not as it will seem,
for what is life besides a dream,
and so I sit with lead in hand,
to try as I may not to be bland.

© 2017 Footprints al carbon


Author's Note

Footprints al carbon
A poem a day keeps the career demons at bay.

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I like your poem and the message.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Really enjoyed the message in this and your author note! Rhymes were good. check the 3rd line of second stanza

Posted 8 Years Ago


Footprints al carbon

8 Years Ago

Thank you. I fixed it :)
Very good job (-: I enjoyed stopping by to read.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Footprints al carbon

8 Years Ago

Thank you.

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Footprints al carbon
Footprints al carbon

Phoenix, AZ



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I'm a part time poet, usually during waking hours. An idea must be fed and put to bed in harmonic frequency as to the sun moving about the sky. Poetry is exhausting so burn clean my peoples. more..

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