Letting You Go

Loving is the greatest feeling a human can have but the most painful feeling when it didn't go the way you expect it to be. First love... such a sweet thing yet it gave me so much pain.

Everything between us was so unpredictable

The closeness that we had was unbreakable…

You became an instant listener that I needed too

An instant everything that made me fell for you.

 

I took every risk for this feeling that I felt the first time

I took the courage and did whatever it takes to make you smile

Though distance between us may be kilometers away

I didn’t care even though fears conquered me completely.

 

I never thought that I will fall harder as time goes by

I have doubts then but I’ve chosen to try

I love every piece that I’ve known about you

But the more I love you the more I felt blue.

 

I do love you but you love her so much too…

It hurts a lot but I’m going to get over you

The more I felt the pain, the more I needed you

But that won’t always be the case that’s why I’m letting you go.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Love is never fair.
"I do love you but you love her so much too…
It hurts a lot but I’m going to get over you
The more I felt the pain, the more I needed you
But that won’t always be the case that’s why I’m letting you go."
Release someone we love. Will break our heart. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[binibiningmaya]

Thanks as always Sir Cayote..
:)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Effervescent Dreams]

Yes, the pain of loving and letting go is so touchingly depicted here. Great work Bini! And i guess that's because its straight from your heart...

Nimmi

[binibiningmaya]

Thanks a lot Nimmi..

Letting go is SOMETIMES better than holding on.

[Braden Freeman]

Love is hard to figure out. I think the best we can hope for is to experience it, the highs and the lows. Thank you for sharing your take on the subject.

[binibiningmaya]

Thank you so much for reviewing.. :)

[Braden Freeman]

You are welcome. Nice to meet you.

[binibiningmaya]

^________^ Nice to meet you too Mr. Braden :)

[Catherine]

Well thought-out, explains why you're letting the person go

[binibiningmaya]

Thanks for reviewing Ms. Cath

[E G TEN]

Better to love and loss than not to love at all, I think.
Poetic yet a heartbreaking piece...letting go at the
end is best. Thanks.

[binibiningmaya]

Thanks for reviewing :)
Yea, acceptance and letting go.

[Amy R]

amazing poem!
its quite relate-able!
wonderful job!

[binibiningmaya]

Thanks a lot Ms. Amy :)

[Amy R]

ur welcome :)

[Outcast]

Isn't it ironic how the ones you love the most cause you the most pain?
The ones who lavish you in the most love are the one who leave you bruised, beaten, berated.
And while you may have to let them go, your head and your heart - in perfect harmony -
Will always be weighed down by the weight of their ever-existing memory.

[hanir]

I feel your pain gurl! ☺ Nicely written!

[Misery]

Very lovely poem.
I am sorry for the pain you have felt, but it allowed you to write this lovely poem.

[binibiningmaya]

Thank you so much :)

[Misery]

You are welcome, dear poet.