It was dark like this the other day

It was dark like this the other day

when life, it turned the other way.

 

my world instantly came tumbling down,

and yesterday's king became today's clown.

 

As if to mourn my fate's call,

Nature cast a gloomy pall

 

Thundershowers lashed the earth

waking man from his blisfull mirth

 

My eyes sifted through the heavy rain

as i gauged the depth of my inner pain

 

blurred images played on my mind's eye

of countless moments that just passed us by

 

moments of sorrow, moments of joy,

lost in the midst of fate's whimsical ploy

 

 

life for me will ne'er be the same

coz i've lost my all in the final game

 

It was dark like this the other day

when life, it turned its face away.

Reviews

[Red Raven]

'my world instantly came tumbling down,

and yesterday's king became today's clown.'

You know what really makes the readers drawn to your works?Your power to express in a very detailed form.Words that expresses more then you want them to feel.Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed a lot!

[deeps]

Wow! This is a very descriptive write here,
So wonderfully written, wonderful flow as well.