If i could...

My life had never been so good,

Thought I tried hard to keep it up with my false mood;

You came in my life as upcoming spring,

My heart was overjoyed & started to sing;

You filled my life with beautiful colors,

Not as the one you find in flower;

But 

I can't make out the place where i fell short,

to result such a deserted drought;

Still

I smile even when my heart is bleeding,the world doesn't know,

Its me or my hearts that's weeping;

Standing on the same way where you dumped me & went away;

Although 

You count me on the same queue,

That had said you they love you;

You know 

It can't be helped & its nothing new between you & me,

I am the only one with my heart to stay for you.    

Reviews

[Anindita Janhabee]

Rhymes so well. And you covered each part of emotion with simplicity. Being apart from the loved one is very difficult. But being away from the loved one even when the distance is closer is even more difficult. Everything happens for a reason. May be your destiny has chosen you someone better and someone whom you do deserve......
Very sentimental and poetic....
I liked the flow very much....
ANINDITA

[Dust That Drifts Throug..]

You did a good job at describing what it's like to fall in love with someone that makes your life beautiful, only to have that person dump you and leave your world in a not so colorful perspective. In the end, you still love that person.

[Biswajeet Samal]

Thank you sir for this comment its an honour for a new writer like me..